For cybersmart were learning about quality blog comments. Today I'm going to share my create of this lesson. We had the choice between word art, screencastify and scratch. I did scratch it was my first time on scratch so I was pretty nervous. I haven't finished and it would be helpful if you gave me some feedback to help me finish it.
hi Anna,
ReplyDeletethis was a good scratch project for your first time
i really liked the background you used
Thank you for the feed back Siya.
DeleteAloh anna i love the scrach project. Its so funny how it just says hey then there is your class talking
DeleteHey Chloe,
DeleteThanks for the feedback.
Remember to check you spelling and stuff.
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ReplyDeleteHello Anna, I liked the voices you put in the scratch project. Did you think about Recording your voice in a less noisy place? Maybe you should speak louder. Did you make the background or did you find it?
ReplyDeleteI found the background but added a few things, yeah I probably should have done it in the breakout space.
DeleteHi Anna,
ReplyDeleteThat was really good as your first go. I've done Scratch for a couple of times but I still don't think I am good at it like you. I didn't notice this before, but after the fox went across and the bear went across, if I pressed the flag again the fox moved and when I kept on pressing the space button, (like a million times) the bear went up and up into the air. I think you should have also recorded it in a quiet background so the audience can hear your voice more clearly.
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Devanshi
Thanks for the feedback Devanshi,
DeleteYeah I definitely should have recorded in a quieter space instead of the noisy classroom.
And I do need to figure the other things out as well. Do you know how to do that?